This is the photography community, so let’s talk. What’s your subject? The volcano or the girl? The mounain top is where the rule of thirds meets, but the eye goes WAY right to the girl.
There’s a lot of foreground that is just bland dirt. Get low and make the scenery the shot. Decide what you want the subject to be and focus on that. Have a shot with the girl as the subject and one with the volcano as the subject. Also, I would have retaken with her hair out of her face.
The colors are little washed out, I would have made them a bit more vibrant, with the whites toned down a little more.
This is the photography community, so let’s talk. What’s your subject? The volcano or the girl? The mounain top is where the rule of thirds meets, but the eye goes WAY right to the girl.
There’s a lot of foreground that is just bland dirt. Get low and make the scenery the shot. Decide what you want the subject to be and focus on that. Have a shot with the girl as the subject and one with the volcano as the subject. Also, I would have retaken with her hair out of her face.
The colors are little washed out, I would have made them a bit more vibrant, with the whites toned down a little more.
I want them both.
Fair, very fair.
I want them both.
I really loved the sort of Marilyn wind swepty vibe tbh, I like it like that.
Blame my pixel 6, this never saw lightroom lol - thanks for the feedback!